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Ho'oponopono

my vow to you

By Beth SarahPublished 11 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read

When you don't see yourself

I see you.

When you don't see your power

I see you.

When you don't see your fire

I see you.

When you don't see your magnitude

I see you.

When you don't see your strength

I see you.

When you don't see your courage

I see you.

When you don't see your brilliance

I see you.

When you don't see your energy

I see you.

When you don't see your light

I see you.

When you don't see your beauty

I see you.

When you don't see your magnetism

I see you.

When you don't see your value

I see you.

The reflection of you in my eyes

depicts a deity -

muscular, steadfast and infinitely wise.

When you don't see yourself

I see you.

Look into my eyes and you will see you

like magic

as you are.

This I vow to you

evermore.

love poems

About the Creator

Beth Sarah

We've been scribbled in the margins of a story that is patently absurd

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock11 months ago

    I agree with Mike, though if you're able to see me in any of these lights, I can only say that you have a great imagination.

  • A wonderful supportive poem

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