El Beso (The Kiss), 1859, painting detail, Pinacoteca de Brera, Milán.
the silky words pass
effortlessly through his lips
his smooth tone melts me
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(Vocal Challenge: write a Haiku about something smooth.)
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B.B. Potter
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Comments (4)
Ooh what a delicious haiku!
Ah, I've melted this way too many times. Loved your Haiku!
El Beso (The Kiss), 1859, painting detail, Pinacoteca de Brera, Milán.
Too tiny