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High Expectations

A comic and poem about expectations and goals

By J. JayPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Drawn by me :)

Goals

My lofty goals bark—

they yank on their tether.

I gasp for more breath,

and we run together.

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My little goals lounge—

they doze on my lap.

I give them a scratch,

and we take a long nap.

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About the Creator

J. Jay

I like to share my art and writings, whether it's silly or serious. I'll also feature a comic I work on called Writing Whoas, which is about the joys and hardships of being a writer. Stick around to laugh or cry.

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  • Caroline Jane2 years ago

    I really enjoy these poems with your pictures. They are both relatable and fun. Thank you!

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Always love your humour and relatable (and skilful) poetry! Excellent job J. Jay. 😊👏

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    ah ha, once again you have created a visual with your drawings and humor! I get mired in details, constantly researching if what I am writing (even if fiction) is correct; a photo for the headliner....you stated it well here!

  • Love this! Playful metaphor for a true experience.

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