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Hey love

I said, "Hey! Love!"

By Gary LougheedPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Michael Fenton found on Unsplashed

Hey! This might hit hard!

But! I love you!

Hey! This might miss!

What’s your favorite color? Blue?

Wanna kiss?

Broken tear falls from the sky

Collides with the tide

Light trickles with tickles

Waking tranquility

Fear the tear

Tear the hell out of the ones that fall from sadness.

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Gary Lougheed

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"While I thought that I was learning how to live, I have been learning how to die." - Leonardo da Vinci

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  • Gregory Payton11 months ago

    Fear the tear, tear the hell out of the ones that fall from sadness. Well Done!!!

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    Love the flow and the words are awesome. <3

  • Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago

    Hey! Fantastic poem! Great work!

  • Antoni De'Leon11 months ago

    Interesting view, lovely poem.

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