Heroes in Hearses
Day 24/365

22
they fought
in the sandboxes they were placed in
defending the weak
driving out shadows
and we only saw
what big brother
and his uncle
wanted to reveal
gossamer sheets
don’t pretty up a crime scene.
22 saw it all
and brought home with them
the fragments of ghosts.
the hauntings chase them now
and turn their mirrors
into sandbox reflections
filling corners of the rooms
with foes once real
that tap them
on their shoulders
keeping them looking behind.
It steals their breath
and their smiles
as they white knuckle grip
for tangible normalcy
that only remains
in picture frames.
They place it all in a jerry can,
bottled,
for fear of domestic enemies
those who have never lived with a ghost
don’t believe
in possession
and they wipe the tears that fall
on a flag that doesn’t
fly
for them
her stars now shine 50 shades
of grave indifference
as they fight the battles of the left behind
no wonder…
no wonder…
22
heroes in hearses
in their mind
choose to lay down their own lives
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb
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I'm simply speechless, Ellie. This is incredible.