Her bubbly and innocent love story
In your eyes, there was a question for me that I couldn't understand, and you couldn't speak it with your lips.
My heart would shatter seeing your mischief, My heart would die seeing your innocence. You would smile so gracefully, that my heart would become rude just by seeing it.
The dimples that formed on your cheeks, that face would settle in my mind. You would raise your eyebrows and ask questions with your eyes, even though you had the answer, your lips would remain silent.
You wanted to win over me every time, and even after winning, I wanted to lose. Your lips wanted to say something, but you never spoke, and I never understood.
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Wow. This poem was like a dance, a dance in interaction. A ball of love being thrown but too innocent, too inexperienced to follow through. Wow I am in awe twice, that even after I’ve attempted to interpret it, it hits me again. You’re very talented, you have indeed ignited my mind and taught me to think beyond what I was able. Well done 👏🏽👌🏽🤗♥️
Great!!💗💕💖
This is a great balance of innocence and awareness in relationships - one that must be managed well.
Lovely ♥︎♥︎♥︎
it's beautiful how you've painted love as both innocent & mysterious. love this!
Great poem!