Hello Sunrise, My Old Friend
Perspective and then some...

Sun,
You’re faithful every morning,
polite, firm and never scorning.
Sometimes you go a' scorching though,
so I have to play hide and seek with you,
like you do sometimes.
You see so much of what happens on earth,
and there are so many smiles that you birth.
You delight in being the center of attention,
the planets orbit your whims and desires,
and your heart's spontaneous kindling fires.
If I could, I'd fall in love with you because you're...
incredibly hot.
Immovable, stoic, consistently - hot.
You're quite literally, so far out of my league,
my name is Pluto.
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (3)
Ohh, this is genius with a little sass and humor! What inspired this cosmic flirtation? 🙂
Awww, poor little Pluto! I wanna hug him!
hahahaha a surprise ending! This is a poem that is so clever and true of the sun, I loved it.