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Hello Mommy... I See You.

by Dblkrose

By DblkrosePublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Baby's First Sight by EarlyLife

There is a moment in time that only a mother understands,

When the creation of life makes its final demand.

She spends hours in agonizing pain,

Screaming at the person telling her to push—

"Are you insane?"

It’s after all the blood, the tearing, the screaming, and such,

Where she’s yelling at everyone, “Enough is enough!

If they don’t get this baby the hell out of me right now—

I can’t push anymore, it hurts!

Owww!”

Then finally, there is relief—and life is born,

When one becomes two, and the physical bond is torn.

The room falls silent as they wait for the cry—

A slap on the ass,

And a wail fills the sky.

The mother is exhausted; the father says he is too,

But we all know who deserves the credit due.

For only a woman can carry that strife—

Though a man will swear he made that life.

But her greatest reward is the moment they bring

A bundle of warmth, of breath, of being.

“Do you want to hold your baby boy?” they coo,

And something divine breaks into view.

You realize his eyes are open—and he’s looking… right at you.

There is a moment in time that only a mother understands,

When the creation of life is finally at an end,

And those precious pools of brand-new life

Twinkle at you, like still water at first light.

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About the Creator

Dblkrose

They call me D. I write under Dblkrose. My stories live in shadow and truth. I founded Black Spyder Publishing to lift my voice—and others like mine. A brood weaving stories on the Web. www.blkspyder.com | [email protected]

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  • Umar Faiz6 months ago

    haha mothers are something else

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