Hell Must Be a Crowded Place
For too many sinners will be placed there

I often tell my kid:
hell must be crowed,
for too many sinners,
will be placed there.
Let me share a story.
It was from India,
generations before.
This woman had two daughters,
and her spouse died.
Girls didn’t inherit,
ancestral property,
in those patriarchy times.
So the brothers of the deceased,
grabbed his share
and gave meager allowances,
to the sad widow.
Land prices increased,
and so did the cost of living,
but the money she was given,
was never enough to survive.
I have seen that woman live
in poverty and indignity —
in a tunnel-like dark place,
squeezed between sprawling houses
of those greedy takers.
They passed the property
to their sons,
and built temples
to leave their legacy.
Hypocrite humans —
for all their godly acts,
are not going to heaven
if they take advantage of
a victim of circumstance.
About the Creator
Seema Patel
Hi, I am Seema. I have been writing on the internet for 15 years. I have contributed to PubMed, Blogger, Medium, LinkedIn, Substack, and Amazon KDP.
I write about nature, health, parenting, creativity, gardening, and psychology.
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Comments (5)
we should look before we leap.
So sad the world is greedy 😭♦️♦️
Good work!
Greed and self are source of war, poverty and conflict in the world today. Good work 🙏👍
Hypocrite is the correct word to describe some humans like this. Loved your poem!