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clouds opened their throats
releasing winter's rain streams
wetting the pavement
Copyright © 1/30/2026 by Andrea O. Corwin
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Comments (6)
Beautiful!
This retains the seasonal thematic elements and visceral nature of the traditional haiku in the modern urban environment, Andi. I love it!
I felt that winter chill through your words. So vivid.
Clouds open their throats. Brilliantly crafted. Nicely done Andrea.
Oooo, rain pouring down clouds throats, that's so brilliant. Loved your poem!
Fabulous work Andrea! 💕