It creeps in from
Somewhere
Probably hell
It emerges in heart
I feel it in my gut
I hate you but
I am malevolent
I am deeply struck
And stuck
Oh love
Jealousy triumphs
While I struggle under the rubble
Of being a peculiar lover
Till summer
I wait for the weight to be lifted
Into air
Out of thin air
Comes the wave of sadness
Drowning me deep into trenches
Making me feel
Almost dead
Heavy and weightless
About the Creator
The Madman
Notes from the underground.
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Comments (6)
We have all felt like this at one time, you bring it home.
Poignant, tragic, and eloquently phrased at each turn - this is inspired work! Thank you so much for sharing this deeply feeling entry, and joining in the challenge!
Highly emotive! Really like: “ Out of thin air Comes the wave of sadness Drowning me deep into trenches Making me feel Almost dead Heavy and weightless”✅
this was stunning and beautifully horribly relatable! you have a new subscriber!
Nicely done!
almost dead....yes, so relatable