Heavenly Heartbeat
Love Poem
Heavenly Heartbeat
We’re heart shaped lovers with Cupid’s eyes
Heads a fuzzy glow across the skies
Cocooned arms
Entwined legs
Heaven is your heartbeat as my pillow
Let’s hideaway some more
In a blissful oblivion
The world doesn’t need to know where we go
(Victoria Day-Joel x)
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Victoria Day-Joel
The Spiritual Poetess
Aquarius Sun/Pisces Moon/Leo Rising ♥️ 🌹
Olympia publishers: https://olympiapublishers.com/authors/victoria-day-joel
🖤 Poetry Inspired by Oliver, Fantasy and Friendship- 2018
🖤New Beginnings-2020
🖤A Piece of Me-2023
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan7 days ago in Beat
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I freaking love this poem! The eyes, the arms, the legs-- sounds like blissful oblivion to me! I think your final photograph is a perfect dessert for this too. I've been trying to read everything from this challenge but I'm slow. I've read a lot and I don't think I've read anything yet with cupid... which just seems natural with Valentine's Day. I have a few entries in this contest that I am proud of, but none of them really mention Valentines. They are just statements/poems about love. I'm very impressed. ⚡💙⚡
Thank you Gregory ♥️ it’s lovely to have feedback and appreciated. Victoria x
Heaven is your heart beat as your pillow as my pillow. Beautifully Done!!