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A haiku (Senryu?)

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

Luminescent love

Basking in adoration

You blew out the flame

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This one is for a fellow vocalist… You know who you are Sam

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About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oooo, this was so deep! Well done!

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    Aww, Andrew... It's beautiful.. And so poignant and on spot. I'm happy to have met you, friend. 😊🤗

  • It is Senryu , but sadly beautiful

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