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Heart Crushed in Love

An Elegy of Shattered Dreams and Silent Tears

By I want Peace 🕊️Published 9 months ago • 2 min read

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### **I. The Blooming**

Once, in the garden of fleeting time,

Where love was a melody, soft and sublime,

I wandered barefoot on petals of trust,

Breathing your name in the whispers of dusk.

Your eyes were the stars that lit my night,

Your voice, the river—so calm, so bright.

I built a home in the warmth of your smile,

Never knowing it would crumble in a while.

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### **II. The Falling**

Then came the storm, unannounced, unkind,

A shadow crept in, slow and blind.

Your words, once honey, turned into thorns,

Your touch, once fire, left me cold and torn.

Was it my fault? Did I love too deep?

Or were your promises never meant to keep?

Like autumn leaves, we withered apart,

Leaving me hollow, with a breaking heart.

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### **III. The Shattering**

Now silence sits where laughter once played,

A ghost of love in ruins laid.

I gather the fragments of all we were,

But the pieces cut deep—each memory a scar.

Do you remember the nights we swore

That time would bend, and love would endure?

Yet here I stand, alone in the dark,

Holding the ashes of a flame now stark.

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### **IV. The Mourning**

I wear my sorrow like a second skin,

A symphony of loss, playing within.

The world still turns, the sun still glows,

But nothing stirs where your love once rose.

I trace your name in the dust of my dreams,

But the ink has faded, like distant screams.

If love was a song, mine ends in sighs,

A broken record of unanswered whys.

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### **V. The Rising**

Yet somewhere beyond this endless ache,

A quiet strength begins to wake.

For even the darkest night must yield

To the slow, sure dawn of a healing field.

I will not let your absence define

The love I carry, still divine.

For though you left, and though it hurts,

The heart that breaks is the one that works.

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### **VI. The Letting Go**

So I release you, not with hate,

But with the grace of accepting fate.

For love is not just joy and light—

It’s also the courage to say *goodnight*.

And though my heart may bear the stain

Of love that brought both joy and pain,

I’ll rise again, I’ll learn, I’ll grow—

For even crushed hearts still know how to glow.

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### **Epilogue: The Phoenix Heart**

Someday, when time has dried my tears,

I’ll whisper to the passing years:

*"I loved, I lost, but still I stand—

A phoenix born from ash and sand."*

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**[End]**

This poem captures the journey of love, loss, and eventual healing in a lyrical, emotional flow. 💔✨

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About the Creator

I want Peace 🕊️

Thinking is my weapon .

Writing it on the paper is my art.

All i want is a Peaceful Environment .

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