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A pinprick is all
it could take to reduce this
to water and salt.
About the Creator
Zachary Keifer
A documentary filmmaker who has just recently began to stretch that creative writing muscle.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Comments (1)
This almost reduced me to water and salt! I love the imagery and the universal feeling of being overwhelmed and on the verge of a breakdown. Well done!