He Put a Spell on You
The Breakup Nonet Challenge
There was a ghost that haunted our love.
He'd sneak into your dreams at night
with promises of bright days
while you shifted in bed.
You believed his lies,
seduced by spells--
the moonlight
alone--
rain.
About the Creator
Geoffrey Philp
I'm a Jamaican writer. I write poems, stories & essays about climate change, Marcus Garvey, Bob Marley, haiku & haibun. I've published a graphic novel for children, "My Name is Marcus." For more info, visit: https://www.geoffreyphilp.com/
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So profound