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Hazy

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By Aspen Marie Published 7 months ago 1 min read
Photograph: mine

Mustard ochre walls

Marked and dirty

Hands, paws, life

Indelible smudges

Of passing time

What if I sit down

Face six inches away

Absorbing colour

Til cones exhaust

Then pull back to observe

Violet ghosts

Eye’s compensation; a gift

Purple city for sober adults

Floaters in my vision

Clarity’s thorn

Annoying tissue fibres

Cast soft squiggles

Dancing in front

Of necessary words

In the bath I soak

Hyper aware

My own flesh

Some parts buoyant

Others sink

Into its liquid cradle

Here I am

Vulnerable, on display

What if you sit down

To watch me

If given long enough

Does my outline reverse

Into someone else

You could have loved

Free Verse

About the Creator

Aspen Marie

In love with life and all of its foibles.

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  • Amy7 months ago

    Always love your poems❤️

  • C. Rommial Butler7 months ago

    Well-wrought! The illusions created by our persistence of vision are no less real than any others created by our perception, though perhaps not as useful in the day-to-day.

  • Marie381Uk 7 months ago

    Really brilliant I loved your poem ♦️♦️♦️

  • Komal7 months ago

    Ooh, there’s something beautifully raw about the image of becoming ghostly in someone else's gaze both fragile and profound.💖

  • Those last three lines hit me so hard. Loved your poem! Also, what's that photo supposed to be of?

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