
Photograph: mine
Mustard ochre walls
Marked and dirty
Hands, paws, life
Indelible smudges
Of passing time
What if I sit down
Face six inches away
Absorbing colour
Til cones exhaust
Then pull back to observe
Violet ghosts
Eye’s compensation; a gift
Purple city for sober adults
Floaters in my vision
Clarity’s thorn
Annoying tissue fibres
Cast soft squiggles
Dancing in front
Of necessary words
In the bath I soak
Hyper aware
My own flesh
Some parts buoyant
Others sink
Into its liquid cradle
Here I am
Vulnerable, on display
What if you sit down
To watch me
If given long enough
Does my outline reverse
Into someone else
You could have loved
About the Creator
Aspen Marie
In love with life and all of its foibles.


Comments (5)
Always love your poems❤️
Well-wrought! The illusions created by our persistence of vision are no less real than any others created by our perception, though perhaps not as useful in the day-to-day.
Really brilliant I loved your poem ♦️♦️♦️
Ooh, there’s something beautifully raw about the image of becoming ghostly in someone else's gaze both fragile and profound.💖
Those last three lines hit me so hard. Loved your poem! Also, what's that photo supposed to be of?