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Hay Fever

Please make it go away 🙏

By Marie381Uk Published 8 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Hay Fever

Eyes on fire,

nose at war,

sneezing like I’ve never sneezed before

windows closed

still it finds me

hiding in curtains, under the bed

no flowers here

no grass, no tree,

just me,

and in misery.

I hate it,

every dusted bloom

every floating bit of doom.

give me rain

or give me snow.

anything but this pollen show.

my throat’s a scratch

my skin feels tight,

I’ve taken pills.

I’ve lost the fight.

My sheets washed twice

house scrubbed clean,

still I wheeze

still I scream.

I don’t call this peace,

I don’t call it kind

it claws at skin,

it fogs the mind.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham8 months ago

    Totally agree with you allergies are horrible, but one can survive them just like you do every day, Good job even in misery.

  • Sandy Gillman8 months ago

    I suffer from hay fever too, it really does make life so much more difficult.

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