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Celestial dart;
Infinity torn by light
As waves wash the land.
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Comments (14)
Oh I love this. - Nicely Done!!
So gorgeous!
Such a lovely and descriptive sky-ku.
A shooting star?
Girl.... you are killing these sky-ku's!!! Leave some for the rest of us!! 😅
Beautiful ✅
great work
Drama and peace both exuded so well! Excellent haiku!
and this is lovely as well.
You are definitely rocking the pathways carved through the skies for this series, Rachel!
I wanna go there now.
Love this, Chum! Well done!
Oooo, I really hope you meant a meteor crashing into the sea and causing a tsunami. At least this interpretation of mine isn't too bad 😅😅
Hi beautiful, nice work