she really fuckin hates me cause i'm a dud fuck
and several other tiny things to boot
she just fuckin me hates cause i'm no good in bed
and to quote her i'm "a really shit root!"
she just just hates me cause i can't make her cum
no mater how soft or hard i work her special bit
she says to stop with the slop and to get on top
then she says that i can't fuck for shit
she just fuckin hates me cause it's only three inches
shorter than she would have liked
she just fuckin hates me because it takes me
a coupla minutes to get hard ready and right
she just fuckin hates me cause i can't make her squirt
like that hoer in that porno online
i tried to tell her it's just a big built up piss
she just glared at me and said "FINE!"
she hates me cause we cant fuck all night anymore
those shenanigans are from an age ago
and nowadays even just thinking about it
is enough to make me blow...
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
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The steps to losing a child
Step One: Lose a child. Not what anyone wants to happen and nothing you can do to change it, but you can go through steps to becoming happy again. You can go through steps to loving again. You can go through steps to become a new you because after losing a child you will never be the same person you once were.
By Tabitha Hinkley6 days ago in Fiction
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Seems like you’ve got a bit of a problem, huh?