i hate you
because of the stars.
i hate you for holding my hand
and stroking my hair
and for the words you whispered
in my ear.
i hate the rage you awaken
within me
like leaping tongues of fire.
i want to hold your face
between my hands
and slap you
(both sides).
in my mind it was you.
it was you who was going to swallow my fears
because you were brighter than my darkness,
it was you who was going to dry the tears
i could not cry
until you left
and now my cheeks are streaked
with black.
am i crazy for hating you for not loving me?
About the Creator
Sara
Don’t look for love.
Be love.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Bruce Lee and The God of War: Kuan Ti
It starts with love.. The Power to the God Of War and Wealth Walk into a Chinese restaurant (even in Oklahoma, USA), a Chinese police station, a kung fu martial arts studio or even a Chinese temple and you often see a red faced warrior holding a heavy quan-do (spear like weapon).
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Comments (4)
Like Brenton said, definitely not crazy! Also, please can you publish a poetry book! I'm addicted.
I love this so much, and no; you're not crazy!
BEST! I love it!
I bloody loved reading this! Bravo.