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Losing power quick
Write it faster add more words
One more line and done
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Joshua Bull
An aspiring writer. I enjoy writing short stories on the relationships between people and the surreal. My poetry is a deep dive into intense emotions within moments.
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The steps to losing a child
Step One: Lose a child. Not what anyone wants to happen and nothing you can do to change it, but you can go through steps to becoming happy again. You can go through steps to loving again. You can go through steps to become a new you because after losing a child you will never be the same person you once were.
By Tabitha Hinkley4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (3)
well written
This is relatable. Its like Hurry up before the thought go away, or writers blocks settle in or I just lose the motivation.
This snippet captures a moment of urgency, suggesting a sudden loss of power or energy. It conveys a sense of immediacy, prompting the reader to feel the pressure and tension of the situation. Adding a few more descriptive words or phrases could enhance the emotional impact and create a clearer picture of what’s happening. A final line could serve as a resolution or a cliffhanger, leaving the audience wanting more.