Haiking Trail

Trail Original 1:

My Edit 1:

Open up the gate

Even though this is the way

My mind still wanders

Trail Original 2:

My Edit 2:

See the morning mist

Sink deeper than the surface

Soils of solitude

Trail Original 3:

My Edit 3:

Full view of sunrise

Each snail's slime color painted

their path sticks onward

Trail Original 4:

My Edit 4:

The fog low grounded

The crows now above the streets

With birds in the clouds

Trail Original 5:

My Edit 5:

Serene and still here

The view of mountains by streams

Frogs ribbit, goats bleat

Trail Original 6:

My Edit 6:

Within the droplet

Hanging from the icicle

Left dogwood blossom

Trail Original 7:

My Edit 7:

Winding through the path

The butterfly flutters on

Parting company

Trail original 8:

My Edit 8:

Deep within the woods

On a branch, caterpillar

It lets the sun in