Hades' Terms and Conditions
Poetry on The Secrets and Burdens We Carry
This poem is about the things we carry but never say. The torch is metaphorical--our unspoken burdens leave their mark.
Our burdens' weight,
Unspoken grief;
Lord Hades steals them,
Like a thief.
So our sorrows, griefs and cares.
Do, when apt, with others, share.
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You installed the app at 3 a.m.
Weighted silence,
βTell it all,β it said--
But you ignored the terms--
Like the rest of us.
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You typed, βIβm alright.β
But Hades intercepted the download.
His emblem?
A torch.
That flares--
Unseen, but burns--
Each time you lie.
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You didnβt pay with coins or credit
Yet, updates arrive;
Harsh whispers through speakers
Unwanted push alerts:
βUnspoken grief detected.β
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Know this--
Hades doesnβt manage your downloads.
He supports them.
With red wrath.
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And you canβt uninstall.
You granted him access.
Nowβhe loads.
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Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.
For Poppy's #13 Prompt:
And Vocal's Things You Can't Say Out Loud Challenge.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Comments (5)
Michelle, I love your take on Poppy's prompt. Listening to your words felt otherworldly!
That's some metaphysical magic in this poem!
I like the blend of mythology and technology. Acting as like a warning, maybe even sounding the fear that comes with every use. Feeling like the terms and condition are in too β fine βa print. But then the undercover meaning shouts forth, that we are lying when we say we are alright. Especially me lol. See? I am laughing to hide the discomfort of admitting that. This poem was lovely Michelle, it's unique and very creative. It had many elements to hide its true meaning, yet it was revealed in a masterful way. π€
Interesting take on the challenge. Good luck!
modern time Hade technology