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Grey Susan

By Ashley Ball

By Ashley BallPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
Grey Susan
Photo by Gabriel Pimentel on Unsplash

They say there’s an old witch who lives on the hill,

No one has seen her, nor knows if she’s real.

Her house stands abandoned, weathered and still,

Like an old scar that lingers, refusing to heal.

They call her Grey Susan, the elders all say,

She once was so lively, before love slipped away.

Now her heart beats for no one, she stays out of sight,

In her house on the hill, shrouded by night.

If ever you see her, have pity and care,

For her smile once sparked flames in hearts ev’rywhere.

Now her veil of grey hangs heavy as air,

Over locks of long silver, like a sorrowful prayer.

Grey Susan, they whisper, was once a great beauty,

She’d bring flowers down from the hill with pure duty.

A basket she wove from the reeds in the glen,

But that was long before love left her then.

So if you should meet her, seek kindness awhile,

Offer a flower, a word, or a smile.

And perhaps, if you’re gentle, your heart free of guile,

You just might see Susan’s own smile for a while.

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About the Creator

Ashley Ball

College student, amateur photographer, and aspiring actress looking into getting back into writing. In the process of writing a short story and a sci-fi/historical-fiction novel that I’d like to publish one day.

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Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Test10 months ago

    A simple smile certainly rejuvenates souls. Especially from an old witch, a symbol of kindness and humanity. Behind every "sadness," there is always a sweet story that deserves to be heard. 💚☀️ :)

  • Kendall Defoe 10 months ago

    A real Christina Rossetti feel to this (cf. Goblin Market)!

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