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Green Eyes of the Hawk

My mystical girl

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Green Eyes of the Hawk

In the depths of your green eyes is a fierce spark

Like a hawk soaring swiftly through the night

With a gaze that can pierce the stillness around

A brilliance that dazzles a breathtaking sight

Yet beneath that fierce beauty a heart bittersweet

As sharp as a lemon where sorrows and joys meet

Each pulse tells a story of love’s ebb and flow

A mix of sweet moments and shadows that grow.

In your eyes lies the wisdom of skies vast and wide

In the chambers of your heart where secrets abide

A blend of fierce passion and a spirit so free

Forever I’ll linger for you captivate me.

The whispers of nature where soft breezes play

Echo tales of your laughter in a gentle ballet

In every shared silence our souls intertwine

As the world fades around us your heart dances with mine.

For your green eyes will guide me through calm and the storm

A fierce hawk in the heavens your spirit my warm

And though lemons may sour their taste can transform

In the heart of our journey our love will keep warm.

So let’s blend our dreams in the light of the day

With laughter surrounding us in every sway

With each word let’s summon all we hold dear

In a symphony of love that only we hear.

Love Will Be Our Guide.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • L.I.E9 months ago

    Aww beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

  • Susan Payton9 months ago

    Wonderul poem Marie. Nicely Done!!!!

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    You got that right, girl. Way to go! Good job.

  • Lana V Lynx9 months ago

    Great poem, Marie.

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Nicely written

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