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Goodbye

By Alex TorresPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Goodbye
Photo by Hala Al-Asadi on Unsplash

-*-

I saw you crying,

when you were saying "goodbye";

I was there by the corner,

packing things in my bag.

Everybody was leaving,

and you had to stay back;

after all, you were the stanchion,

keeping bodies on track.

-*-

I saw you crying,

buried hands in your back;

with a smile that reflected

nothing but real facts.

But I saw what you did,

and how you changed your mood;

You became solid rock,

I felt my hopes renewed.

-*-

Nothing beats your spirit,

not even something like this;

"I know little 'bout tomorrow...

...ignorance is bliss".

You caught me smiling,

and you smiled with me;

"hoping for the best",

is our next addressee.

-*-

By Alesia Kazantceva on Unsplash

FriendshipGratitudeinspirationalMental Healthslam poetry

About the Creator

Alex Torres

Started writing short stories back in 1988 at work, when I had an empty page to fill for the employee's internal magazine. Taking the pen again after a 30 year-long hiatus, exploring where it takes me this time.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a month ago

    Intriguing tale… I’m wondering: who, where & why? Very emotive. Like Dharrsheena, I like the hopeful ending.

  • RAOMabout a month ago

    The theater of life. Written in a beautiful poem. Always like this, Alex. I was thrilled and got goosebumps. Someone always leaves our life, and someone stays like a rock, even if their knees hurt, even if their breath feels heavy, even if regrets haunt them. :)

  • The ending seemed reassuring. Loved your poem!

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