Searched You in leaves, 'cause you were somewhere
Looked in moon, saw, but not so clear
All the colours of canvas, screaming-- about to hear
It wasn't hide and seek, but ligit to bear
Still can't figure out? What you're finding in here?
A word so strong- Yes it's LOVE -- my fear!
Naah! not the one you're thinking about dear'
Connection with GOD is what love is, I swear!
Glad I found it in my blood and ear
In my every vein, HEART, brain, it's queer!
Author's note :
Searching GOD in every corner of the World??
He's literally in your HEART!
You'll find Him if you're Smart!
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
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Comments (2)
In these lines, I have felt a deep connection between love and God. The search for love is depicted through nature and art, ultimately advising one to feel the presence of God within oneself, adorned with philosophical thoughts. This poem expresses the journey towards self-realization and spiritual love, where love is not limited to a person or emotion, but symbolizes a connection with God. Wonderful! πΏπ¨π
for me NO words. This poem beautifully captures the profound journey of finding divine love within oneself, reflecting the intimate connection between the heart and God.