Glowing jellyfish
Poetry on Empathy
This is for Vocal's Light Breaks Water Challenge.
Light breaks water--people empathise with gentleness, not force.
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In stillness deep, where silence looms
A jellyfish with glowing rings does zoom
Shedding sword threads, bright at the ends
Trying to stitch truths that won't mend
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Its light, too strong, will blind and halt
Builds cold walls that only shout
An angelfish, with its soft gleam
Knows light too harsh will not redeem.
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"Slow down," it prompts, "Soften your light,
A gentle beam guides more than might.
For them to see, with softened hearts
Use light with a muted start."
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So light breaks water—not to fight,
But to soften dark with quiet light.
And in that glow, the deep learns how
To open up, to breathe, to bow.
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Light from the jellyfish, breaks through the stream
But quiet, softened and redeemed
In that gentle glow, the heart does learn
To open doors, hear, and discern
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Insight comes softly, not a blast
A patient glow that warms a heart
At times, to light, we must first wait
And shine with care, not push, not hate.
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Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

Comments (11)
What a delightful poem! Jellyfish are so interesting, beautiful, and meditative. I like what you did with the video, the music, and changing the colour of the jellyfish. And congratulations on Top Story, Michelle! 💫
Such a lovely poem and a timely lesson in empathy. Beautiful work, Michelle! Congratulations on your top story.
Beautiful!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This was really lovely!!
Really beautiful poem.
Gorgeous poem xxx Also, congrats on top story! Well deserved!!!!
This is beautiful, Michelle. Well done.
Such a beautiful poem, Michelle!
Just ask the jellyfish, as its lights glow. Love the interlude at the end.
This certainly was very heartwarming. Loved it!