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Glowing jellyfish

Poetry on Empathy

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - June 2025
Glowing jellyfish
Photo by Ganapathy Kumar on Unsplash

This is for Vocal's Light Breaks Water Challenge.

Light breaks water--people empathise with gentleness, not force.

🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼

In stillness deep, where silence looms

A jellyfish with glowing rings does zoom

Shedding sword threads, bright at the ends

Trying to stitch truths that won't mend

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Its light, too strong, will blind and halt

Builds cold walls that only shout

An angelfish, with its soft gleam

Knows light too harsh will not redeem.

🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼

"Slow down," it prompts, "Soften your light,

A gentle beam guides more than might.

For them to see, with softened hearts

Use light with a muted start."

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So light breaks water—not to fight,

But to soften dark with quiet light.

And in that glow, the deep learns how

To open up, to breathe, to bow.

🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼

Light from the jellyfish, breaks through the stream

But quiet, softened and redeemed

In that gentle glow, the heart does learn

To open doors, hear, and discern

🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼🪼

Insight comes softly, not a blast

A patient glow that warms a heart

At times, to light, we must first wait

And shine with care, not push, not hate.

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Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Susan Fourtané 7 months ago

    What a delightful poem! Jellyfish are so interesting, beautiful, and meditative. I like what you did with the video, the music, and changing the colour of the jellyfish. And congratulations on Top Story, Michelle! 💫

  • Marilyn Glover7 months ago

    Such a lovely poem and a timely lesson in empathy. Beautiful work, Michelle! Congratulations on your top story.

  • Aspen Marie 7 months ago

    Beautiful!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • angela hepworth7 months ago

    This was really lovely!!

  • Darwesh Khan7 months ago

    Really beautiful poem.

  • Annie Kapur7 months ago

    Gorgeous poem xxx Also, congrats on top story! Well deserved!!!!

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    This is beautiful, Michelle. Well done.

  • Lana V Lynx7 months ago

    Such a beautiful poem, Michelle!

  • Antoni De'Leon7 months ago

    Just ask the jellyfish, as its lights glow. Love the interlude at the end.

  • This certainly was very heartwarming. Loved it!

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