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Ghost Jar

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2024
Ghost Jar
Photo by Rifqi Ali Ridho on Unsplash

1, you placed me in a ghost jar.

2, you let me rot inside.

3, years later you still haven’t finished your locked door, you keep adding finishing touches to keep it from being opened

4, moments that felt like eternity, stolen from me as you mock the pain you inflicted upon me

5, I slipped out of the jar

6, you fell into the deep well, scared

8, we skipped a step because now you got your way again

7, time is not adding up, numbers don’t matter anymore, adding is subtracting

10, I guess you can have the whole jar

11, I am sure you’ll give me some of my plasma wrapped in plastic

12, inch by inch, my ghost turns into mud

13, you sure know how to manipulate, manage, manifest new ghosts into your jar

2009, the year I died

2024, I broke the jar

Now, you melted it down

Ghost Jar: frantic and soft,

Deep Blue with a side of sweet purple

The first slap hits the heart/hardest

Your non/apology in an echo that drops the sound of our death

A glass smith cannot stop the sound of destruction in a ghost jar

1, I’m the same ghost in the gutter

The ghetto

The most dangerous jar

Open it like Pandora’s Box

Open it to your soul’s peril

fact or fiction

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem

  • ThatWriterWomanabout a year ago

    I love the parallel you drew here - outstanding!

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    My WOWS Melissa! This is some serious depths. Congratulations on the top story selection!

  • Rajkumarie Deviabout a year ago

    Intensely beautiful! The '2009' line got to me. It was an interesting year for me as well; wrote the poem below about it, if you would like to read :) https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-two-princes%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

  • Jeff Hutchingsabout a year ago

    This is excellent and a well deserved top story. Intense. Loved it

  • Jason “Jay” Benskinabout a year ago

    awesome work, congrats on Top Story.

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Excellent work, my friend. Congrats on the TS.

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    A powerful little ditty of stream of consciousness.....wow. Congratulations on Top Story, too!

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    Woah

  • Poppy about a year ago

    You are soo talented. This is crafted so well. The captivating style was unrivalled. Loved this so much.

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Hey Melissa! 👋 Fascinating, with a very intriguing structure, when you got to 2009 got me thinking! 😊

  • Gosh so dark, poignant and intense! Loved it Merly!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    I enjoy this story written in a unique way. Very captivating 🥰

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