1, you placed me in a ghost jar.
2, you let me rot inside.
3, years later you still haven’t finished your locked door, you keep adding finishing touches to keep it from being opened
4, moments that felt like eternity, stolen from me as you mock the pain you inflicted upon me
5, I slipped out of the jar
6, you fell into the deep well, scared
8, we skipped a step because now you got your way again
7, time is not adding up, numbers don’t matter anymore, adding is subtracting
10, I guess you can have the whole jar
11, I am sure you’ll give me some of my plasma wrapped in plastic
12, inch by inch, my ghost turns into mud
13, you sure know how to manipulate, manage, manifest new ghosts into your jar
2009, the year I died
2024, I broke the jar
Now, you melted it down
Ghost Jar: frantic and soft,
Deep Blue with a side of sweet purple
The first slap hits the heart/hardest
Your non/apology in an echo that drops the sound of our death
A glass smith cannot stop the sound of destruction in a ghost jar
1, I’m the same ghost in the gutter
The ghetto
The most dangerous jar
Open it like Pandora’s Box
Open it to your soul’s peril



Comments (14)
Beautiful poem
I love the parallel you drew here - outstanding!
My WOWS Melissa! This is some serious depths. Congratulations on the top story selection!
Intensely beautiful! The '2009' line got to me. It was an interesting year for me as well; wrote the poem below about it, if you would like to read :) https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-two-princes%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This is excellent and a well deserved top story. Intense. Loved it
awesome work, congrats on Top Story.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Excellent work, my friend. Congrats on the TS.
A powerful little ditty of stream of consciousness.....wow. Congratulations on Top Story, too!
Woah
You are soo talented. This is crafted so well. The captivating style was unrivalled. Loved this so much.
Hey Melissa! 👋 Fascinating, with a very intriguing structure, when you got to 2009 got me thinking! 😊
Gosh so dark, poignant and intense! Loved it Merly!
I enjoy this story written in a unique way. Very captivating 🥰