
Baby soft, brunette hair
Pale flawless skin
Eyes of silver pearl seas
Full of joy within
Watching me with brilliant gaze
Loud, insistent coos
Carefully she takes the bite
And smiles as she chews
Dainty hands, so sensitive
Explore the world around
Tiny feet with chubby crease
Testing new-found ground
Soft, pink cloth caressing cheeks
A milky baby smell
The fear of messing up just once
Contented sigh dispels
So content she looks around
At tree and sky and me
I marvel at her innocence
And wonder who she'll be
In the dark of early morn
Nothing stirs but air
I cradle her in gentle arms
My Genevieve with care
I caress her soft brown hair
And those chubby cheeks
I thank God for my miracle
And kiss my baby sweet
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This is beautiful!