From Hades to her
maybe success without love is not success.

I found success is boring,
Wisdom is lonely
And real beauty is shallow.
Eternity is a very long time,
Walking with this lonely soul.
You not being mine is hell enough.
I have worked the narrow road
That leads to the heavens,
And tasted sweet victory,
But victory is empty.
I slumber in my lonely bed
And my sheets so sad,
In a house painted black.
I walk the streets
With a garment of invisibility;
No one to see and not to be seen.
I love the cosmos,
But I have no one
To share with these wonders.
I had this great big joke,
I had no one to tell
So I laughed all by myself.
All I need is you,
My most special friend,
Because if I can’t have you to hold
Then there is nothing to be held.
If I can’t have you
Then I found nothing to be had.
I shall live like in the past;
As a forgotten soul,
Walking this lonely road
Searching to be praised
For the success
That can never fill these lonely bones.
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters


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Perfectly crafted
May be, a nice perspective.