Freeze Frame
Frosted Verse Challenge

As kids throw off toasty warm blankets
Springing from where they were snuggled
In hibernatory safety
Hoping, praying for snow
A frozen fantasy land finally greets them…
Icicles line windowpanes;
Morning dewdrops frozen in time
Cascading runnels stopped midstream
Awaiting their savior the sun
To free them to run their course…
Mists of hot morning breath
From small noses pressed there
Trying t0 smell the magic
Leave a hazy fog of webbed wonder
On crystalline glass
As worshipful eyes stare in awe
At the world enshrouded
In a blanket of pristine ghostly white…
Excited children hurriedly dress
Before careening out the door
Leaving behind smells of hot cocoa
And roaring fireplace
As mothers ensure scarfs are snugged tight…
Frosted rime of frozen tundra
Crackles ‘neath booted feet
Running pell mell to sledding hill
Dragging flat bottomed racers
Pulled from abandoned storage…
Jostling, giggling, they clamber upslope
Only to race back down
Amidst whirling storm clouds of dancing flakes
Tracks of summer dreams left in their wake…
Bundled in coats and mittens
Young architects build fantasy castles of ice
While mini Gods create snow soldiers
Tasked to guard winter’s frozen queen
From the assault of snow cannons…
Laden trees laugh at the sight
Of joyful youngsters,
Shaking their branches to send
Showers of snow onto little heads
Where it slithers under collars
Sending shivers of delight
Down supple spines…
Shining bright faces turn up
Red cheeks puffed
As tongues dart out
To capture, to taste, mosaics
Of perfect natural sweetness…
Fathers pause in their driveways,
Momentarily lost in nostalgia
As they watch their progeny play
In winter’s wonderland
Before heading to work
In cars newly shod with snow chains…
Mothers bake cookies
And heat hot chocolate
To warm their offspring
When cold fingers and tingling toes
Bring them back to the nest…
First snow of the season
Celebration of a tiny death
Preparatory to birth of new life in Spring

About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
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Comments (2)
Nice work.
This was soooo beautifully written! Loved it!