
We call it free will,
a gift wrapped in choices,
but each choice comes with a cost,
a price we don’t see until it’s paid.
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We dance in the illusion,
basking in the freedom,
unaware that every step
ties us to something deeper.
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In the end, it’s not so free—
this “will” we cherish.
For its bound in chains unseen.
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We choose,
but who controls the consequence?
God or the devil,
the cost is always there.
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Two beings, Two paths
One choice to make— each leads to a price.
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The irony is stark:
we hold the power,
yet we’re bound by the price.
Free will, they say,
but freedom is never free.
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What a shame to revel in the liberty
Of a price you can’t pay.
Sold by a dealer you didn’t once acclaim,
Hence now your soul must pay.
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The irony is bitter—
you’re just borrowing,
and the debt will come due.
About the Creator
Marvelous Michael
I’m so glad you are here!
“Heaven and earth will pass away, but My words will by no means pass away.”
Matthew 24:35 NKJV
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Comments (3)
“but freedom is never free” soooo very powerful and true!
Oooo, this was so profound! Loved your poem!
That first stanza says it all. You’ve written a powerful poem.❣️ FREE WILL definitely can be the downfall, right?