
Rain wrote soft lines across the street,
and the red bus waited like a held breath.
Concrete stacked above me in heavy shelves,
each slab cupping a small fire of light.
The steps glowed.
Water ran along the edges.
A single figure crossed the entry.
Somewhere a door clicked.
I had planned nothing.
Still, the city felt ready,
like a stage just before the first word.
The building looked like a fortress,
not medieval, but stubborn and kind
in its own square way.
I stood under the overhang and listened
to the hush that comes with weather.
My coat dripped.
My heart did its steady work.
Then the small shift happened.
Oh, I thought, this is the moment.
Not a grand sign, only warmth spilling from the stairwell.
The glass held a reflection
that did not argue with me.
In this situation, I could understand
how a life turns: a bus door opens,
a foot lifts, a path brightens by a few lamps.
The driver’s hands rested on the wheel.
The engine gave a patient murmur.
Mist softened the far blocks until they seemed possible.
I climbed aboard, coin in my palm,
and found a seat where the window
caught a slice of glowing concrete.
Rain stitched the view together.
The tires began to move.
It was simple.
Not fate, not thunder, only a kind city,
a safe roof of light,
and the will to lean forward.
The bus curved past the fortress.
The street widened.
The red paint shone against the grey.
I kept looking outward, and also in.
Both directions agreed that the first step had counted.
And that’s how it all began.
About the Creator
Diane Foster
I’m a professional writer, proofreader, and all-round online entrepreneur, UK. I’m married to a rock star who had his long-awaited liver transplant in August 2025.
When not working, you’ll find me with a glass of wine, immersed in poetry.



Comments (3)
Every beginning counts for something, being brave enough to start, Great poem.
Placid. Evocative. A great entry for the challenge! ⚡💙 Bill⚡
Great job building atmosphere