Forgive my Absence
I'm Sorry Dear Friends

In shadows dim, where silence lingers still,
I hear your words, a longing to fulfill.
Forgive my absence, a brief interlude,
As life's challenges in chaos ensued.
Time drifted away like sand grains in the wind.
But now I'm here to offer assistance.
I'll tell you a fresh story, my friend.
A verse embellished with vibrant and real hues.
The world rotates, full of hardships and struggles.
But I'll locate the threads of life in its depths.
I'll paint the words you want with my pen.
We'll speak softly in the embrace of poetry.
Oh, how quickly the hours pass! But don't worry;
we'll escape together.
We'll travel across deep valleys and lofty mountains.
No time will pass in this lyrical dance.
So let us roam through the verse's maze,
Exploring wonders, drifting through the cloud.
With each fresh phrase,
I'll attempt to deliver a smile,
And erase gloom, even for a while.
Though hurdles may dance upon your path,
Know that my words will aid to ease your rage.
In moments rare, when inspiration gleams,
I'll write with intensity, feeding hopeful hopes.
I appreciate your patience, my dear friend of mine.
Your kind words touched this poet's heart divine.
Through the ups and downs, in prose and verse,
I'll always be there for you.
So let's continue our trip together,
navigating the broad stage of life.
More poetry will emerge,
occupying the days and nights.
I'll construct celestial joys for you, my friend.
Blessings to all :)
About the Creator
Jazmin Fernandez
Hello Beautiful soul🕊️Here I am an imaginative freelancer, and marketer with a passion for storytelling and creating meaningful content. Writer, creator, such as articles, novels, scripts, poetry etc.
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Comments (17)
Wonderful ✍️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️
a charming style!
This was lovely and I’m also impressed by the colorful image.
Congrats on the Top Story! The poem resonates deeply, beautifully capturing the restorative power of poetry in navigating life's challenges. Great work!
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This is so beautiful to read, congratulations on Top Story!
Hi Jazmin. This is beautifully perfect. Well deserving of a Top Story. Congrats.
Absence makes the heart grow fonder and can make you come back stronger than ever!
With skills like yours, how can anyone resent your absence? The poetry is a gift and we thank you for it :)
Love the image! And the poem is lovely.
Congratulations on your Top Story💖✨😉🎉🎉🎉
Such wonderful writing and beautifully constructed. Congrats on your Top Story.
I like this a lot. It's an almost therapeutically calming read.
Welcome back!! ☺️☺️. This is beautiful! Love the idea of constructing celestial joys 😁
Sometimes we all need a break from people and life's expectations, but words can always be a comfort. Well done!
Heyyy, so glad that you're back! Loved your poem!
👍☺️ Great job and lovely rhythm and rhyme. Good to have you back!