You are my love, I hold so dear...
I love you so, always and forever my darling boy...
my precious boy, I see you clear mine and always
You came to me when I needed you most, know this my precious soul, you were always meant to be..
When I held you in my arms that very first time. my heart and soul told me one thing I must protect this precious gift of life ..
I force myself to walk after the C section only hours after so I could make sure you would not be on your own in that room for your first hours on earth so sacred so...
I heard them go "Miss Edwards Miss Edwards" calling to me to have help but no I must do this myself as I walked pain...I was not sure how, not sure what, but it was that one soul element love non other than traditional love forever more...
You are my love, I hold you dear forever more and ever more
I see you I'll, I want to take away that nasty bug but I feel you ease as I hold you tight in my arms.... hold so dearly tight...
You feel my soul, my love so deep, my energy more knowing "mummy got me, she is here with me forever more"
You are my love, I hold you dear forever more and ever more
You have my love, you have my soul, you have my bed whatever you need for mummy is here throughout this bug to make sure you get what you need.
I will watch you close, stay with you close, check your head. Keep you calm, keep you ease you are my boy....
I carried you for months, I felt and heard you before you came into this world, I knew one element to protect this precious gift....
You are my love, I hold you dear forever more and ever more
whatever you need I'm here for ever more...
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Cryptic Edwards
Cryptic Edwards is a writer exploring the hidden depths of human experience through fiction, life writing, poetry, and performance.
Drawing on techniques such as soul writing, dream work, method writing
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Nothing is more powerful than a mother’s love. Great poem
🧑🧒Oh my. The fact that you forced yourself to walk only hours after the c section, shows how much you care for your son. 🧑🧑🧒This was beautiful. It was so tender and careful. Your choice of words, so calming — a promise, pointing to security. The way you treat your son could be both felt and seen here. 🧑🧒I would love if he reads this. Knowing his mommy was there to help him get rid of that nasty bug. Offering your bed and your all. 🧑🧑🧒I can't help but feel emotional. This is how I wish my father spoke of me... My mother too... ♥️🤗🖤
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This is such a beautiful and deeply emotional piece. You can feel every ounce of love and devotion in
There’s a quiet power in your words — they don’t scream, they just stay and heal.