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For My Firstborn

My Oldest Daughter CEL

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

My dearest daughter, my firstborn child,

You are the light of my life, the apple of my eye.

You are everything I could have ever wanted in a child,

And more.

You are kind and compassionate,

Always thinking of others before yourself.

You are intelligent and curious,

Always learning and growing.

You are strong and independent,

Always standing up for what you believe in.

I am so proud of the person you have become,

And I know you will continue to do great things in life.

I love you more than words can say,

My sweet, sweet daughter.

Love,

Mom

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Awww, such a beautiful poem for your daughter! I loved it!

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