Poets logo

Flower Petals

Can it be revived?

By Alyse McDonaldPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

The flower petals fall,

And it begins to wilt.

Can it be revived?

They all think of ways,

Their personalities so different,

A fat slob, feminine woman,

nervous geek and an intellect.

“It can” the intellect shouts

As he jumps to his feet

He draws a chart explaining how.

The man explains his plan

To the others in the room

Detail by detail, the flower will get better.

“It will work!”

They all shout

Decisions final.

I love you

And everything that you stand for

I love you the way you are.

We as a pair are perfect,

We can make it work I am certain.

So lets make our love deeper than ever.

Let's work through this,

Let's make the flower better.

love poems

About the Creator

Alyse McDonald

Hello! Welcome to my Vocal Blog! Thanks for stopping by!

M

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments

There are no comments for this story

Be the first to respond and start the conversation.

Sign in to comment

    Find us on social media

    Miscellaneous links

    • Explore
    • Contact
    • Privacy Policy
    • Terms of Use
    • Support

    © 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.