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Five Senses to the End of the World

As Foretold By a Mouse

By Everyday JunglistPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Image by Jeroným Pelikovský from Pixabay

I heard a story just the other day

About a kid who saw a mouse possessed by a demon fly right out the open door of his bedroom

He could taste the ash in his mouth

And smell the odor of burnt sulfur

And hear seven trumpets blare, as loudly as the end of the world

surreal poetry

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Everyday Junglist

About me. You know how everyone says to be a successful writer you should focus in one or two areas. I continue to prove them correct.

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Carol Ann Townendabout a year ago

    It sounds like my Grandson when he doesn't want to go to bed. I love this!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    What a great take on this challenge

  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    Ooo great job! 👏

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