take my hand
Come with me
You know you want to
My dear, we have so much to see.
***
I tire of the old
Long for the true
Your body
Is not what I need
So give me all of you
***
If life only is a game
I want to play with you
Find our love
In the sky
With a bird
Over in the park
***
Find our love
With the old man and the sea
The sun set
When it saw the moon
***
Find our love
It is here to stay
You know
The way
The lord had a plan
With us hand in hand
And you can
find our love
With all that is true
***
About the Creator
Jazzy
Follow on IG @jazzygoncalves
Head of the Jazzy Writers Association (JWA) in partnership with the Vocal HWA chapter.
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This was so lovely! You write fantastic love poems!