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Final Denouement

For the breakup nonet challenge

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
Final Denouement
Photo by Vinicius "amnx" Amano on Unsplash

This nonet is a follow up from Quiet on the Homefront.. for that see: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/all-quiet-on-the-homefront

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I cradle her carcass in my arms

Ignoring leaking crimson blood

Anguished, a pained scream tears forth

Michelle, my beloved

We could have fixed it

Found a way through

Together ...

Too Late ...

Gone

heartbreak

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Just noticed your comment to Dharrsheena- I definitely prefer the first (personally). ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š

  • Too late indeed. I love that you did a sequel!

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    So sad to hear that, may god gives you peace and fre your mind

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