
living in the abundant fleeing shadows
of an illusion stuffed predominantly with
first stale second hand
third pick fourth tier choices
no inner voices no monolog no dialog
no sounds of any kind; in or out
you will see what you need to hear
when a time is right
facts will be twisted like shit balloon tricks
lies dressed up as honest, reliable and wholesome
hate is the new news; screw loose goose views
and escape is but a fantastic dream
that sits and teases on the tips of our minds
for we are sentenced to this eternal machine
begrudgingly we trudge there
with no thought or care
and then and when
told to make a move
and remain perfectly still
shown how to hunt and stalk
but not allowed the kill
threatened and cowed
promises diluted
with a forked tongue noise
passions are dulled
lies are endorsed
then worshipped,
and sold
the latest must have distraction
the confused are used
flagrantly abused
pin popped exhausted
ignorant and deflated
they just exist
and we're meant to be thankful
expected to remain supine we're supposed to feign a certain level of state sanctioned pre-approved carbon neutral bio-organic animal free smile friendly happiness and pretend that everything is fine
that everything is fine
everything is fine
is fine?
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Whoaaa, this was so deep and thought provoking! Fantastic job!
Awesomely deep