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Field of the Unreturning

A Song for the Days That Will Not Come Again

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 2 months ago 1 min read

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

a drifting hush lies over all that waits to fall

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

A crown of wilted daisies shows what time has burned

their petals trembling at the season’s call

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

The creek repeats the truths I never fully learned

its glitter flickering against the coming fall

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

A chapel’s distant bell rings thin, its metal turned

by years of weather pressing toward their fall

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

The moonlight bares the paths where hope once burned

each trace diminishing beneath the pull of fall

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

I kneel where long-lost dreams once rose and wildly burned

their warmth now fading with the restless fall

I keep returning to the field where once I yearned

and hear the voice of the child who first had yearned

Villanelle

About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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