In the depths of longing, where emotions intertwine with the raw essence of desire, there lies a powerful yearning that transcends mere want.
The intense pull towards another person that can feel as necessary as the air we breathe.
This fervent hunger, this 'feening,' is a testament to the intense connection that has formed between two souls, a reminder of the passionate fires that love has ignited within us.
It is both exhilarating and consuming, a dance of emotion that lingers on the soul for an eternity.
I ache for him, I burn for him, I cannot breathe when he is not near, I can only describe this as love because the thought of losing him hurts me down to my very soul, and only love can hurt this deeply.
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Mercedes Chavez
Come with me, lets go on an adventure together, see the world through my eyes, let me paint a picture with my words, I promise you will be able to feel what I felt the first time I experienced it. Love, sadness and everything in between.
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As the first light of dawn creeps through the curtains, it's your essence that fills the room, casting a warm glow on the day's promise. With each sunrise, I find a reminder of your radiance, the spark that ignites the joy in my heart. You are the silent melody that plays with the morning breeze, the harmony to my day's beginning. In the quiet moments of awakening, it's your thought that brings the first smile, a serene prelude to the symphony of moments we share. You are the unwritten verse in the poem of my day, the unspoken words that resonate with every beat of my heart.
By Mercedes Chavez2 years ago in Poets
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