Close your eyes
Feel the rhythm
Sway to the beat
Let the music take you
To a place where there is no pain
No sorrow, no heartache
Sound of the music
Feel the rhythm
Moving your body
Let your worries go
Just enjoy the moment
Let the music take you away
To a place of tranquility
Close your eyes
Feel the rhythm
Sway to the beat
Let the music take you
To a place of freedom
The music is a river
Flowing through your body
Carrying away all your troubles.
The rhythm is a heartbeat
Keeping your grounded and safe.
The melody is a song
Speaking to your soul
Telling you that everything is going to be okay
Close your eyes
Feel the rhythm
Sway to the beat
Let the music take you
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Music is definitely therapeutic! I loved your poem!
Beautiful.