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Faultlines

Adding up to nothing

By Iris ObscuraPublished 15 days ago Updated 14 days ago 1 min read
Art by Iris Obscura on Deviantart

Concrete first.

No, god first.

No, pressure. Always pressure.

~

I stand. Or lean. Or am already falling and calling it posture.

The crack is there before the thought.

Administrative fracture. Clipboard energy.

Matter filing a complaint against itself.

~

My body is a stack of arguments.

Weight vs balance.

Skin bargaining with stretch.

Muscle promising things it cannot deliver.

Gravity owns the lease.

Fails to collect.

~

Life overlays badly. Tracing paper drunk.

Fault lines miss each other, on purpose.

Energy hoarded like guilt in the hips.

Released like a confession that ruins the dinner.

~

Fault lines. Those. Yes.

Overclocked myths.

High voltage, IKEA instructions.

Gods split at belief seams,

shed miracles like drywall,

leave rubble shaped like prayer hands.

~

I call this rebellion because delay sounds pathetic.

Because inevitability feels impolite.

Because humans rename panic as philosophy.

~

Entropy scrolls.

Heat death thirst traps.

No rush.

No hate.

Just math closing tabs.

~

I lean anyway.

Warm animal.

Bare skin on cold certainty.

Pressing myself into a crack,

naming the error “me,”

holding still long enough

to feel chosen

before the equation continues

without asking.

.

Free Versesad poetry

About the Creator

Iris Obscura

Do I come across as crass?

Do you find me base?

Am I an intellectual?

Or an effed-up idiot savant spewing nonsense, like... *beep*

Is this even funny?

I suppose not. But, then again, why not?

Read on...

Also:

>> MY ART HERE

>> MY MUSIC HERE

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  • Lamar Wiggins12 days ago

    —I call this rebellion because delay sounds pathetic.— Nice line!!! Another great piece from the mind of Iris O. 🔥🔥🔥

  • Alex Torres14 days ago

    Quite interesting piece this one. I like the pace and rhythm it has, and the feel it gives. I know it says “sad poetry” in one of the tags, but it’s just spelling truth. Love it. 🌹

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