as the last red leaves,
these evil days shall away,
a weak'ning shadow
About the Creator
Gabriel Huizenga
Twas for love of words that I first joined this site:
Poetry, especially, and dear short stories too;
For to live one's best is to read, and to write!
So find me in words here, and I'll find you 💙
Thanks for stopping by! :)
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If You Love Me, You'll Do It
I met Jason when I was five years old. I could say that I loved him from the moment I saw him. He was so handsome to me and I felt in awe by his presence. When they introduced him as the new kid in school, I wanted to be his friend right away. I remember it like it was yesterday. I remember his smile and how he didn't seem shy. He appeared confident and ready to learn. I waved at him and said "hello," before anyone else could even say a word. He sat next to me, and I asked him if he wanted to be friends. He looked so happy as he said, "Yes!"
By Sidney Smith (Sid Smith)5 days ago in Fiction
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Hope resplendent found in so few words. Lovely. Is this picture your own art work? It so perfectly portrays the sentiment found in your haiku.
reminds me of one of my mother's favorite hymns by the same name. "farther along we'll know all about it... we'll understand why." not much for gospel but there's something to be said about the "evils" we may think of weakening in the light of sought knowledge, understanding, and community. ❤️❤️ masterfully woven haiku 🙌🏻
You are a true poet, my friend. The 13 words you used told a complete story. A story of hope.
From your haiku to the celestial beings ears
A haiku with a touch of Shakespeare. Striking, hopeful and filled with gossamer beauty. Great work, Gabriel! Good luck on the challenge!