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Far Away

2025 Story #12

By TheSpinstress Published 10 months ago 1 min read
Far Away
Photo by Chris Hardy on Unsplash

Elsewhere

is where the verse

has gone; in his pocket

down the street, whistled while

he walks.

By gryffyn m on Unsplash

Let me know what you thought in the comments.

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  • Tiffany Gordon10 months ago

    Nicely done!

  • I don't really understand the context here, so sorry 😅😅

  • The flow of the poem feels almost like a wistful breath, and the choice of words adds such depth to the emotions you're conveying. It's a touching exploration of love, separation, and the hope of one day being reunited. Thank you for sharing this poignant and beautifully written piece. It really resonated with me.

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    Wonderfully written. But I don't find it too sad, I actually find it uplifting

  • D.K. Shepard10 months ago

    Oh this has such a beautiful melancholy sense of loss to it, and so lyrical too! Wonderful poem, Spinstress!

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