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Family Ties

Who am I and who were they?

By Silver DauxPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Family Ties
Photo by Jason Blackeye on Unsplash

I am my mother in the morning.

Exuberant and full of bubbling joy as though someone

Dipped their hand into a crisp, cold river

And stolen the flashing reflection of the sun.

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I am my grandmother in the middle of the day,

Leaning toward the rumbling gossip,

Earthquakes on the lips of my friends and eruptions

Into the hum-drum of an ordinary life.

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And I am my father at night. Silent. Sombre.

I am drained from the day and my reflection looks sad,

Haunted in a way that the eyes betray.

Broken and standing pieced together by luck and grit.

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Who am I then when the sun begins to set?

Who am I in those weak moments between day and night?

I'd dip my fingers into magma for the sliver of an answer.

Instead, I stand quietly and watch the red slip into blue.

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And who am I at the witching hour and moonrise?

I am the melancholic wanderings off a fog that gives an air of archaism

And the red light of night fades like forgotten blood beneath my nails

But the question remains.

"Who am I at sunset?"

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • John K2 years ago

    I enjoyed the structure of this one a lot, the framing of the question, and especially the reframe at the end. The progression of identity from morning to night to morning, but with emphasis on sunset in particular. Very thought provoking!

  • Whoaaaa, this blew my mind! So profound and poignant! I loved your poem so much!

  • sleepy drafts2 years ago

    Stunning, thought-provoking, and incredibly moving. Gorgeous work.

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